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Re: Chapter 16 - 763-764

[elleth]

It's not dark, but overcast weather is good enough for beasts to go out, and they aren't quite as bothered by the cold. If they run into anything, it's going to be a beast.

I'm a bit on the fence as to what might happen, but fffff, if anything does, it feels more likely for Emil to wind up in danger. This is like an escort quest waiting to happen, and more than that, Lalli is the (understandably!) recalcitrant party at the moment, so unless he overcomes his disappointment at Emil on his own, something will need to happen to jolt him out of it. And I know this has been tossed around a hundred times by now, but how about the practice page?

Of course, see Sunday happen. See Sunday throw a beast at Lalli, who overcomes his disappointment while Emil carries him to safety in his arms, with a good long opportunity to think... sometimes I wish SSSS were a bit less difficult to predict.